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Welcome to Weekend Writing Warriors, the weekly hop for everyone who loves to write! Sign up below with your name, blog and email and share an 8 to 10 sentence snippet of your writing on Sunday. Your post needs to be live between 12:00 noon on Saturday 04/23/16 and 9:00 AM on Sunday 04/24/16. Visit other participants on the list and read, critique, and comment on their 8sunday posts. Previously, in my WIP, The Tree of Life, Book 2 in my Illuminati series, Kirin and her brothers were about to enter the Copacabana Palace in Rio during the Magic Ball with a kidnapped scientist in tow..albiet he is disguised in a tuxedo and full face mask..slightly drugged, though they are passing him off as drunk.... “What’s going on?”
“Oh, you’re back once again. You look great in a tuxedo, by the way. I didn’t realize you were so tall.” “First time you’ve seen him upright,” Roscoe offered, helpfully. Molten gold signaled his anger from behind the oval eye-slits of a full face mask Roscoe had secured to the scientist’s face, letting them know that if nothing else the man recalled the security chief’s remark and harsh treatment from earlier, and that the effects of the drug-soaked cloth were beginning to wear off. “Move,” Andrew urged in a harsh whisper, shouldering the tightly grasped man in the opposite direction. Kirin looked up and noted that their security team had averted them from the elevators and the safety of their penthouse suites, instead directing them further up the marble staircase toward the ballroom, unmindful of the rumpled flounces and disgruntled minglers they jostled in their haste to make way through the crush of excited party guests. She instantly sobered and followed their lead, knowing their route must surely be blocked, probably by some previously off-duty revelers who just happened to be on site. But for their enemy to have discovered their whereabouts so quickly could mean only one thing--her blind date was carrying a tracking device and would need to be searched. I hope you enjoyed this week's snippet! Be sure to read the clips from the other fine participants in Weekend Writing Warriors and Snippet Sunday!
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Iris
4/23/2016 10:29:28 pm
Nice snippet and great pic to go along with it.
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Elizabeth Alsobrooks
4/23/2016 11:13:53 pm
Thanks, Iris.
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Heather Boyd
4/23/2016 11:18:17 pm
Fascinating snippet and event... except for that pesky tracker. Thanks for sharing.
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Elizabeth Alsobrooks
4/24/2016 12:13:45 am
Thanks, Heather! If it's not one thing...
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4/23/2016 11:48:46 pm
Oy! I'm chuckling. This just keeps getting better and better. Now the poor fella has to be searched! lol. Well, that can't be all bad, right? Maybe that depends on who gets to do the searching. Great snippet, Elizabeth!
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Elizabeth Alsobrooks
4/24/2016 12:15:06 am
Thanks, Teresa! I was thinking of searching him myself, at this point!
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Karen Michelle Nutt
4/24/2016 12:10:22 am
Hope they find that tracker. Enjoyed the snippet. Great imagery.
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Elizabeth Alsobrooks
4/24/2016 12:16:38 am
Thanks, Karen! I was just telling Teresa that I wanted to look for it, but I bet Kirin beats me to it!
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4/24/2016 03:08:20 am
That pesky tracker is spoiling all their fun, and might really ruin the scientist's night!
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Elizabeth Alsobrooks
4/24/2016 10:48:27 am
Or, it could make it a lot more fun! It will make mine more fun, for sure!
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4/24/2016 05:00:22 am
OOOO! I volunteer to search him!! And Andrew! Just sayin'. ..
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Elizabeth Alsobrooks
4/24/2016 10:51:50 am
Naughty girl! No wonder you write such hot sex scenes! You always did have a thing for Andrew. You'll be happy to know he figures much more prominently in Kirin's story than he did in Luc and Nalini's.
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4/24/2016 06:48:16 am
Uh-oh! I wonder how this revelation will change their plans. Nice snippet and picture! :)
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Elizabeth Alsobrooks
4/24/2016 10:54:00 am
Thanks Jessica! Their plans are ever-changing, for sure!
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4/24/2016 08:41:15 am
Why do I foresee her performing a strip search in the near future? Can't wait! ;-)
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Elizabeth Alsobrooks
4/24/2016 10:56:50 am
Because you have such a wonderful imagination!
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Elizabeth Alsobrooks
4/24/2016 10:59:25 am
Thanks, Amy! The Magic Ball is supposed to be "the" event of the carnival season and admission tickets are quite coveted to this A-lister event.
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Spotted already? That can't be good. And I wonder how thorough a search this is going to entail :)
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Elizabeth Alsobrooks
4/24/2016 11:01:41 am
Thanks for the read! I'm not sure about the browser issues. I get a black framed box with white boxes and black text...? GREAT job of commenting with the difficulties you overcame. Thanks again and sorry for your inconvenience!
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4/24/2016 10:19:18 am
Fascinating story going on and I love the setting! Great snippet...
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Elizabeth Alsobrooks
4/24/2016 11:03:18 am
Thanks, Veronica. One of the things I like best about writing action/adventure stories is the exotic settings. I wish I could personally research them all!
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Elizabeth Alsobrooks
4/24/2016 11:05:08 am
Well, Aurora, since Kirin is a research scientist, I mean, with an MD and Ph.D, I think she will be very professional...hahahahaha
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Elizabeth Alsobrooks
4/24/2016 01:34:42 pm
I think so too, Gem!
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4/24/2016 04:07:43 pm
You've created a fascinating situation that tingles with both danger and potential sensuality.
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Elizabeth Alsobrooks
4/24/2016 04:15:49 pm
Thanks, Ed!
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Victoria Adams
4/24/2016 05:48:22 pm
LMAO at the line - “First time you’ve seen him upright,” Roscoe offered, helpfully. Fabulous! Tweeted.
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Elizabeth Alsobrooks
4/24/2016 06:32:34 pm
Thanks, Victoria! I actually grinned myself when I wrote that.
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Elaine Cantrell
4/24/2016 06:17:34 pm
That tracker is a real nusiance.
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Elizabeth Alsobrooks
4/24/2016 06:33:19 pm
Just wait until you find out where it is, Elaine!
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4/24/2016 07:32:29 pm
The pictures you're using are beautiful! Hope the tracker is easy to find and I wonder if the scientist knows he's being tracked?
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Elizabeth Alsobrooks
4/24/2016 08:26:21 pm
Thanks, Karysa. You are very clever, but I'm not going to tell...yet!
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4/24/2016 07:51:44 pm
Fun snippet...hopefully they conduct a very thorough search for that tracking device. ;-)
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Elizabeth Alsobrooks
4/24/2016 08:27:53 pm
Oh yes, T.M.! They must leave no shirt tail tucked or button buttoned!
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4/25/2016 12:15:31 am
I wonder if she's going to volunteer to do the searching?
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Elizabeth Alsobrooks
4/25/2016 10:42:13 am
LOL! I know I would, P. T. !
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Elizabeth
4/25/2016 09:20:46 pm
Thanks, Cecilia!
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Rachel Sanderson
4/27/2016 06:07:43 am
So much fun, great setting and sparky dialogue. Look forward to the next instalment, searching included!
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Elizabeth Alsobrooks
4/27/2016 09:07:03 am
Thanks, Rachel!
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Elizabeth Alsobrooks
4/30/2016 11:01:32 am
Yes, it's not a great time to be a scientist, is it, Linda?
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