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Here’s the link to the Weekend Writing Warriors central page, so you can visit all the participants sharing excerpts today…a fun way to sample new books and find new authors! (Also welcome to the Sunday Snippet visitors!) This Week's Snippet from my WIP, The Tree of Life, Book 2 in my Illuminati series... When we left off, the three siblings, Kirin, Luc and Andrew, had broken into a pharmaceutical company owned by their arch enemy, who also fund some rather nasty International terrorists, to retrieve a specimen stolen from Kirin's research laboratory. She accidently knocks a scientist (who is going to be her love interest) off his feet, literally, and then her brother, Luc, clocks the guy so they can save explanations and get on with the job at hand. They have just jumped into a waiting van with some of their men... The siblings quickly shed their coats, revealing sophisticated if elaborately embellished evening attire, and donned artisan-created masks. Kirin fastened the second dangling diamond and emerald earring and then pulled on gem-beaded gloves and watched as two of their men switched the scientist’s white lab coat for a tuxedo jacket, slapped a black bowtie around his neck and a mask over his face. It covered the swelling bruise on his chin nicely. Just then the man began to rouse and pushed against the mask, muttering, “Wha-what’s going on? Whe-where am I?” Roscoe lifted the mask, reached forward and held a cloth against the now struggling man’s mouth. “Easy, Cinderella, you’re about to go to The Magic Ball.” The van pulled around the corner to an emergency only parking zone and stopped beside a long, dark limo with smoky windows and diplomatic flags on the hood that allowed it to park anywhere, even in Rio. The party-goers, along with their once-more-docile-if-still-disoriented guest, quickly transferred vehicles. Ten minutes later, as they pulled to a stop in front of the Copacabana Palace Hotel, Kirin chuckled and said, "Well, this should be interesting--us, him, and fifteen-thousand of our closest friends." I hope you enjoyed this Snippet! Be sure to visit the other great writers at Weekend Writing Warriors and Snippet Sunday! #8Sunday #SNIPPETSUNDAY
42 Comments
4/17/2016 03:11:24 am
Sounds like a very clever way to cover their tracks - and that's a great final line!
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Elizabeth Alsobrooks
4/17/2016 04:57:14 am
Thanks, Peter. I agree. It should be pretty easy to hide just about anything, especially a "stoned" person, in that party.
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Iris
4/17/2016 03:32:22 am
I agree, interesting is the word i'd use here as well. I really like it so far.
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Elizabeth Alsobrooks
4/17/2016 04:58:21 am
Thanks, Iris. I really appreciate the encouragement.
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4/17/2016 05:21:13 am
Ooooo! I'm so excited to see you working on this book again! LOVE these characters!
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Elizabeth Alsobrooks
4/17/2016 12:37:27 pm
Thanks, Nancy! I hope you have coffee brewing. A week or two and I'll have a big enough chunk to send your way for shredding! LOL!
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4/17/2016 05:25:33 am
Great set of action sequences in this one. Enjoyed it.
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Elizabeth Alsobrooks
4/17/2016 12:38:33 pm
Thanks for the read, T. M.!
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Rachel Sanderson
4/17/2016 06:12:18 am
That is quite the transformation! Great, fast-paced scene.
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Elizabeth Alsobrooks
4/17/2016 12:39:48 pm
Thanks, Rachel. High praise! James Rollins got me hooked on action/adventure.
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Elizabeth Alsobrooks
4/17/2016 12:40:33 pm
Thanks, Jessica! I really appreciate it.
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4/17/2016 09:13:40 am
Love all the details of their plan and also the Cinderella line! Great snippet.
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Elizabeth Alsobrooks
4/17/2016 12:41:57 pm
Thanks, Joyce. Now the trick is to turn this guy into a hunky Prince Charming after all this trio has put him through...LOL!
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4/17/2016 09:43:58 am
Love the Cinderella line. Really sets the tone. Good snippet, Elizabeth. :)
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Elizabeth Alsobrooks
4/17/2016 12:43:41 pm
Thanks, Siobhan! I'm glad it worked.
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4/17/2016 10:29:00 am
What a thrilling scene! Now I really want to go to this ball. :-)
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Elizabeth Alsobrooks
4/17/2016 12:45:15 pm
You and me both, Christina! I love to travel and research my settings, but sometimes you just have to research, wish and dream...
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4/17/2016 10:50:47 am
Loved how their plan is playing out. Got a kick out of the Cinderella line. :)
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Elizabeth Alsobrooks
4/17/2016 12:47:17 pm
Thanks, Karen! I really appreciate the encouragement.
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4/17/2016 01:30:08 pm
I can't even imagine how it will work out, bringing a captive with them to a huge ball.
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Elizabeth Alsobrooks
4/17/2016 02:24:39 pm
Me either, Ed! No, wait, I do know... Thanks for stopping by!
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4/17/2016 04:46:52 pm
Great setup and details here! How are they going to get away with this, with 15000 people? Looking forward to more...
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Elizabeth Alsobrooks
4/17/2016 05:03:50 pm
Thanks, J. Rose! That is the question of the day. Hiding in plain site? Time will tell.
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Victoria Adams
4/17/2016 06:55:54 pm
Now I'm gonna have that Barry Manilow song in my head. At the Copa - Copacabana.....great snippet.
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Elizabeth Alsobrooks
4/18/2016 12:34:58 am
Great minds think alike, Victoria. I actually almost put a clip of that song on my blog post! LOL!
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Elizabeth Alsobrooks
4/18/2016 12:36:38 am
What writer whose heroine is a research scientist trying to retrieve a stolen plant sample wouldn't want ot visit a Botanist's blog? Nice to see you here, too! Thanks!
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4/17/2016 08:00:11 pm
There's nothing more fun than a masked ball, especially if you weren't invited.
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Elizabeth Alsobrooks
4/18/2016 12:37:26 am
Exactly what I was thinking, Elaine!
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Elizabeth Alsobrooks
4/18/2016 11:12:24 am
Thanks, Amy!
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Elizabeth Alsobrooks
4/18/2016 11:13:29 am
Thanks, Gem! I appreciate the encouragment! :)
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4/18/2016 08:05:39 pm
A madcap scene that is truly delightful, Elizabeth! I'd read this. :-)
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Elizabeth Alsobrooks
4/21/2016 06:14:09 pm
Ew, Teresa, just what every writer loves to hear! Thank you so much!
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4/20/2016 06:09:58 pm
That sounds a bit dangerous, bringing an hostage to a party. I'm not sure he'll be in the mood to have fun.
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Elizabeth Alsobrooks
4/21/2016 06:15:29 pm
Linda, you are so funny! I suppose that might be a bit of a buzz kill.
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4/20/2016 09:58:53 pm
Fun snippet. For some reason it reminds me of an old 60s or 70s spy film or TV show. Sounds like they've found a great place to hide in.
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Elizabeth Alsobrooks
4/21/2016 06:16:46 pm
Thanks, P.T. That would be fun!
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4/22/2016 09:13:28 am
Can't wait to see what happens at the ball! Fabulous snippet!
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