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Welcome to Weekend Writing Warriors, the weekly hop for everyone who loves to write! Sign up below with your name, blog and email and share an 8 to 10 sentence snippet of your writing on Sunday. Your post needs to be live between 12:00 noon on Saturday 12/10/16 and 09:00 AM on Sunday 12/11/16. Visit the other participants on the list and read, critique and comment on their 8sunday posts. Spread the word, share the love, warriors. Twitter hashtag #8sunday. I will continue to share from my Stolen Secrets Fantasy Romance. The heroine, Lady Isabella Valentine, has been hired to retrieve the same artifact from an anonymous benefactor, who has sent a helper, David Khoury, to assist her on the archaeological dig. Prince Mukhtar wishes to change her mind. This current scene is from just after the prince has left her shop. She stared at the door long after the bell stopped jingling, wondering just exactly why so many people were interested in this particular relic, and how they could have discovered so quickly that she had recently acquired the map to its whereabouts. One was perhaps a coincidence, but two in the same day meant trouble. Big trouble, and more secrets than she, in her excitement over this morning’s hefty paycheck, had bothered to investigate. What had she gotten herself into? The door flew open and she jumped, then relaxed once she recognized her cleaning woman. “Hello, Misha,” she said. “Good evening, Lady Isabella,” Misha said, turning to bolt the door behind her, before crossing the shop and disappearing into the Persian rug labyrinth, seeking cleaning supplies. Isabella reached into her pocket and pulled out her cell phone, because she knew one thing for sure, she needed backup. I hope you enjoyed the snippet I posted for Elizabeth today. I was a little late since I overslept. It's not my fault though. I had to wait up for Elizabeth who was at the 4th Avenue Tucson Street Fair, whatever that is. All I know is it's a terrible thing because it made my dinner late. If over 600,000 people attend it in one weekend, there must be a lot of hungry doggies! Don't forget to visit all the other Weekend Writing Warriors and #SnippetSunday writers for more great reads!
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Elizabeth Alsobrooks
12/15/2016 05:30:36 pm
She's one smart cookie. Thanks, Aurora
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12/11/2016 09:14:46 am
It seems like she has a secret she doesn't even know about, which sound fun and dangerous. I guess there are always a lot of people looking for relics.
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Elizabeth Alsobrooks
12/15/2016 05:31:34 pm
Thanks, Linda! I hope it is and yes, there are a lot of treasure hunters in that part of the world!
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12/11/2016 10:00:25 am
Yes, if that many people are after her, she will need help. Nice snippet!
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Elizabeth Alsobrooks
12/15/2016 05:32:39 pm
Thanks, Jessica! I agree!
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Elizabeth Alsobrooks
12/15/2016 05:33:26 pm
Thanks, Botanist! Nice to see you back!
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12/11/2016 10:23:34 am
Great setting. I love the way one can get lost in it.
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Elizabeth Alsobrooks
12/15/2016 05:46:42 pm
Wow, thanks so much for your kind words, Angelica.
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12/11/2016 10:36:03 am
Glad to see she's sensible enough to call for backup although of course now you've got me very curious as to who she'll ask for help. Great snippet!
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Elizabeth Alsobrooks
12/15/2016 05:47:24 pm
Thanks, Veronica. I'm so glad it hooks!
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12/11/2016 11:52:58 am
What has she gotten herself into, indeed! Glad she's getting some back up -- hopefully from someone that won't betray her.
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Elizabeth Alsobrooks
12/15/2016 05:48:05 pm
Thanks, P.T. She does have a lot of suspicious characters offering to help, doesn't she?
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Elizabeth Alsobrooks
12/15/2016 05:48:40 pm
I guess I will have to reveal that, Christina!
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12/11/2016 01:11:46 pm
Yep, definitely big trouble. Wonder who this backup of hers is and what she thinks they can do about this situation! Great snippet.
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Elizabeth Alsobrooks
12/15/2016 05:49:18 pm
Thanks so much for the support, Janell. It means a lot!
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12/11/2016 01:27:30 pm
I had to go back and read the previous excerpts. Interesting!
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Elizabeth Alsobrooks
12/15/2016 05:50:03 pm
Thank you so much for the encouragement, AR!
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Elizabeth Alsobrooks
12/15/2016 05:50:39 pm
Thanks, Cara, I was hoping to leave that vibe!
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Elizabeth Alsobrooks
12/15/2016 05:51:01 pm
Thanks, Pam!
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12/11/2016 03:01:27 pm
You do such a great job setting the scene here. I think calling for backup is very wise. Well done! :)
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Elizabeth Alsobrooks
12/15/2016 05:51:46 pm
Thanks, Julie. Your support means a lot to me.
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12/11/2016 03:22:23 pm
Definitely sounds like she's going to need back up. I'm curious to know who she's going to call.
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Elizabeth Alsobrooks
12/15/2016 06:09:43 pm
Thanks, Karen! All will be revealed shortly!
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Alicia Dean
12/11/2016 04:06:41 pm
Nice snippet! Intriguing hook. Made me want to read more. :)
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Elizabeth Alsobrooks
12/15/2016 06:10:11 pm
Thanks for the kind words, Alicia!
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Elizabeth Alsobrooks
12/15/2016 06:11:08 pm
Yes, she needs it. Thanks, Elaine.
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12/11/2016 07:15:03 pm
Good she realizes something's awry! Because she's right, this is all happening way too fast for coincidence.
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Elizabeth Alsobrooks
12/15/2016 06:11:45 pm
Exactly, Caitlin. She is in over her head!
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12/11/2016 08:18:22 pm
Glad she's alert. No such thing as coincidence. She does need backup. Nice snippet.
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Elizabeth Alsobrooks
12/15/2016 06:12:41 pm
Thanks, Diane. I appreciate your encouragement!
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Elizabeth Alsobrooks
12/15/2016 06:16:51 pm
Thanks, Ed. That's my goal!
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