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Welcome to Weekend Writing Warriors, the weekly hop for everyone who loves to write! Sign up below with your name, blog and email and share an 8 to 10 sentence snippet of your writing on Sunday. Your post needs to be live between 12:00 noon on Saturday 01/16/16 and 9:00 AM on Sunday 01/17/16. Visit other participants on the list and read, critique, and comment on their 8sunday posts. The Tree of LifeSetup: Book 2 of the Illuminati series, had several completed chapters, but unforunately I lost the manuscript in a fluke computer charge cord electrical shock and consequent hard drive wipe. Not even the Geek squad could revive it. Needless to say I was pretty bummed out, but if you read my IWSG post you know my New Year's Resolution was to reignite my writing spirit. So I have begun with the below "mood" creating excerpt. The night air undulated, drunken, soggy with tumbling vapors. Fog surged upward and then interspersed with heavier moisture it swirled around the base of crypts and crumbling statuary. Precipitation was slow but steady, forming rivulets on the bows of umbrellas held above stooped heads. It snaked down massive tree limbs, fed moss-covered stones and coaxed tears from guardian angels carved into marble walls that flanked the ancient family mausoleum. Mourners disappeared into the dark interior, and two silhouettes separated themselves from the deeper shadows of an adjacent oak. Refusing to be comforted, the small one pulled away from her brother's comforting arm and took a step toward the gravely pathway between the crowded sepulchers. Damp moss blocked her progress. Moved by increasing winds, tendrils swept the ground of the graveyard like a ghost trailing ragged skirts. Ljluka Vargas, immortal prince and the cool-headed enforcer for the Vargas Dynasty, must go up against his most intriguing enemy, the mysterious Nalini. She intends to beat him to the secret archaeological site of The Book of Life which contains the genetic secrets of their ancient ancestors. In order to escape the cruel domination of her family and gain freedom for her mother, Nalini assumes the role of assassin. In her rival, the sleek and deadly Luc, she finds a different kind of danger. She’s supposed to eliminate him, but that would foil destiny’s plan for them to be together. It’s a race from power-hungry D.C. cabinet rooms through the secret realms of the Vatican, from cloud forests and desert sands to the caverns of the Underworld as mankind hangs in the balance. For whoever possesses the Book of Life has the potential to rule the world, offering or denying immortality to the human race.
12 Comments
1/16/2016 07:37:35 pm
Beautiful excerpt, Elizabeth. Your writing is rich with imagery. Nicely done!
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Elizabeth
1/17/2016 12:50:01 am
Thank you for your kind words, Teresa.
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Elizabeth
1/18/2016 12:28:31 am
Thanks, Christina
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Kris
1/17/2016 09:27:45 am
your slow build and amazingly descriptive language just pulls a reader in!
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Elizabeth
1/18/2016 12:29:13 am
Thanks, Kris. From your ears...
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1/17/2016 12:06:40 pm
Gorgeous atmospheric prose, loved the description and I really came back to reality with a thump when the excerpt ended. MORE please!
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Elizabeth
1/18/2016 12:30:14 am
Yes, reality can be somewhat startling at times! Thanks for kind response.
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1/17/2016 01:51:33 pm
Veeeeery moody, broody. Nice! Oh, no! You lost your chapters! If you ever sent them to me, I may still have them. I'll check.
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Elizabeth
1/18/2016 12:25:55 am
Thanks! I hope I did! Plllleeeeaaaase! At least the fleshed out synopsis? I will owe you big time!
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1/17/2016 03:43:18 pm
This snippet transported me back to the soggy days of my youth up on the British Columbia coast.
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Elizabeth
1/18/2016 12:32:28 am
Wow, hope you live in a cheerier climate now! LOL!
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