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He said. She said. Dialogue. Often tough, but one of the most useful tools for building tension or inferring personality and budding relationship. Give and take between the sexes is especially necessary in the romance genre. Here's the first conversation between my h/h in this YA Urban Fantasy/Romance.
#8Sunday From: Daughter of Ancients
“I’m Hunter Nye,” whispered a deep voice in my ear.
I went perfectly still instead of jumping, even though he startled me.
“Nice to meet you, Ms. Smithers. Do you have a first name?”
Mr. Wow was granted a brief, frosty smile.
His face rested on his fist, an effective mask for tempting lips that barely moved upward and still teased a dimple from his only visible cheek.
Glancing at Mr. Wiltin whose attention I had captured enough for one day, I decided to use caution as well. “ Stefanie,” I said softly.
8/1/2015 11:31:54 pm
NICE! Pulls you right in with flirtation and temptation.
8/5/2015 10:33:29 am
Thanks! I really do like these characters. I'm glad I sucked it up and dove back in!
8/2/2015 01:56:54 am
Way to play it cool, girl! Hope she can keep it up, since it sounds like he's not going to make it easy for her.
8/5/2015 10:39:04 am
Oh, I see a give and take relationship beginning here. LOL!
8/2/2015 05:19:04 am
Interesting conversation they're embarking upon!
8/2/2015 08:34:46 am
The most intriguing aspect of an intriguing conversation is that he's whispering in her ear. This leads me to speculate on exactly what is going on here.
8/5/2015 10:40:50 am
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8/10/2015 06:56:10 am
LOVE LOVE LOVE your dialogue!
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