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Welcome to Weekend Writing Warriors, the weekly hop for everyone who loves to write! Sign up below with your name, blog and email and share an 8 to 10 sentence snippet of your writing on Sunday. Your post needs to be live between 12:00 noon on Saturday 07/30/16 and 09:00 AM on Sunday 07/31/16. Visit the other participants on the list and read, critique and comment on their 8sunday posts. Continuing with my current WIP, The Tree of Life, we are in the secret underground headquarters of Osiris, an undiscovered pyramic in Egypt.... “I gathered as much. You will enlighten me, surely, my love.” “He was in my thoughts,” Isis said. “A first born then,” Osiris responded gesturing toward a cup of spiced tea a kneeling servant offered. “The shapeshifters have psychic ways, and there is some rumor that the purest blood line may still possess some magic too. We have known this for centuries.” When Isis extended her hand, he lifted the cup and handed it to her. The servant, head bowed, backed from their presence. Isis drank. When she lowered the glass, she looked into her husband’s eyes and said, “I commanded him to stay.” I hope you have enjoyed Elizabeth's snippet this week. I wish I could have some of that sweet bread! Please visit all the other wonderful Weekend Writing Warriors and #SnippetSunday authors to find some fabulous new reads!--Hudson, signing off to go watch my favorite Beethoven video!
34 Comments
7/31/2016 06:02:24 am
Thank you for the great snippet, Hudson! It's interesting how the two worlds are connected. :)
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Elizabeth Alsobrooks
8/3/2016 05:10:24 pm
Thanks, Jessica!
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Elizabeth Alsobrooks
8/3/2016 05:11:27 pm
Thanks, Aurora, I always have to remember to put a little down time in to let the readers catch their breath.
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7/31/2016 08:32:13 am
Intriguing snippet. Wonder why she ordered him to stay and why he wanted to go.
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Elizabeth Alsobrooks
8/3/2016 05:12:31 pm
Good questions, Siobhan!
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Elizabeth Alsobrooks
8/3/2016 05:13:59 pm
Thanks for the kind words of encouragement, Amy!
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Elizabeth Alsobrooks
8/3/2016 05:15:00 pm
Thanks, Christina...that's just the beginning!
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7/31/2016 10:40:03 am
Interesting all the twists and turns as your story unfolds! Great snippet.
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Elizabeth Alsobrooks
8/3/2016 05:16:08 pm
Thanks, Veronica. I love plot twists and this family is just full of intrigue!
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Elizabeth Alsobrooks
8/3/2016 05:17:09 pm
Oh, good, Leah! That means I am putting in the right teasers!
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Elizabeth Alsobrooks
8/3/2016 05:17:57 pm
You have very good senses, Botanist!
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7/31/2016 12:47:38 pm
Ooh, what a great bit of lore about the shapeshifters. Love this world and intrigued as to what's going to happen now that she's commanded him to stay!
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Elizabeth Alsobrooks
8/3/2016 05:18:49 pm
Ah, that is the intriguing bit, J. Rose!
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Elizabeth Alsobrooks
8/3/2016 05:19:45 pm
Thanks, girlfriend! Coming from the queen of sizzle, I take that as a huge compliment!
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7/31/2016 06:43:09 pm
I love the idea of gods just chillin' out in their pad! Fun read!
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Elizabeth Alsobrooks
8/3/2016 05:20:40 pm
Wouldn't it be cool, MJ?!
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7/31/2016 07:01:37 pm
Nice! Very intriguing. Good dialogue, and I love the image.
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Elizabeth Alsobrooks
8/3/2016 05:21:20 pm
Thanks, Alicia!
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7/31/2016 08:52:35 pm
Which Beethoven video is that, Hudson? I like the one Bernstein//NY Phil of Symphony #3. ;-)
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Elizabeth Alsobrooks
8/3/2016 05:22:30 pm
It's a Disney video, Ed! LOL!
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8/2/2016 11:29:56 pm
Command WHO to stay? Interesting backstory to the shapeshifters. I wonder what she knows that the others don't.
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Elizabeth Alsobrooks
8/3/2016 05:23:43 pm
Usually a lot, which is why they're all leary of her and her power...
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Julie Evelyn Joyce
8/3/2016 04:54:55 am
Love the flow of your writing! This was an excellent snippet, and great dialogue, too! :)
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Elizabeth Alsobrooks
8/3/2016 05:24:45 pm
Thanks so much for your kind words, Julie! This group keeps me writing!
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8/4/2016 10:35:32 pm
I really like the comfortable tone of their discussion.
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Iris
8/5/2016 05:38:50 am
Intriguing snippet this week.
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