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I've been posting from my current WIP, Book 2 in my Illuminati series, The Tree of Life. Today you learn a little more about the hero, Rodrigo, whose nickname the heroine has found out is Rio. ::Caution:: Tweeked for sentence demands of Blog rules!
Rio walked deeper into the forest and breathed in the familiar odors, because the other, his darker, more primitive self that he kept locked away deep inside, hidden and almost tamed, was awakening and restless.
It was the other who increased his pace into a steady jog, and the other made his skin tingle and itch and his fingertips clench and uncurl and his toes scrunch up and squash within the confines of his boots. He pushed back, just a bit more, and the other squeezed his throat, making him growl, though it came out more a cough in sound. Almost there, he shoved through some interlaced root outcroppings and came upon a small pond. At last, his shirt was wrenched from his pants and ripped open, and he shrugged it off quickly and let it fall. His pants soon followed, and then it felt so good to tug out of his boots and socks, wading into the water. Rio dove down, a few glorious strokes later, he let himself relax,and let the beast free. His skull broadened and his jaw widened, becoming powerful enough for the incisors this other was so fond of to fit in his mouth. He surfaced and breathed; the skin on his body had already been replaced by fine black hair with darker rosettes, widely spaced and dotted with dark spots. Reaching out with a wide paw, he sliced through the water and headed for shore. Once there, he shook the water from his broad-shouldered, muscular body and stretched, relishing the release from physical restriction and confining domestic habitats the two-hundred-and–fifty-pound black jaguar padded over to Rio’s pile of clothes and raked the ground with razor-sharp claws so that they would remain undisturbed until his return because Rio might try to tame his inner beast, but his other self was king in this rainforest, and knew it.
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30 Comments
6/12/2016 04:13:42 am
I really enjoyed how you write about 'the other', Elizabeth. It heightens the tension and increases the sense of barely contained power.
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Elizabeth Alsobrooks
6/13/2016 10:05:06 am
Thanks, Kim. I'm so glad you thought it worked well.
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Elizabeth Alsobrooks
6/13/2016 10:05:57 am
Thanks, Nancy!
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6/12/2016 06:29:48 am
I love the description of that shift! Great snippet! :)
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Elizabeth Alsobrooks
6/13/2016 10:07:02 am
Thank you, Jessica! It's always an important scene.
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6/12/2016 07:05:07 am
I love cats!
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Elizabeth Alsobrooks
6/13/2016 10:10:04 am
Cool, Aurora! I first saw black jaguars in person here at the Reid Park zoo. They were once native here in AZ, all the way to the Grand Canyon, which just fascinated me. It was a trip to Sedona with my daugher that cinched one of the settings and Rio's form...
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6/12/2016 07:59:36 am
Fabulous description of the transformation, and I love jaguars! One thought: have you considered making him have a name for the other that he uses when he thinks of him?
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Elizabeth Alsobrooks
6/13/2016 10:12:31 am
Funny you should say that, Joyce...I was just having that conversation with my significant other! A brilliant idea! Since you agree, it must be a sign!
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6/12/2016 10:29:26 am
That was a very cool scene, definitely got the flavor of man vs. cat. Enjoyed the snippet!
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Elizabeth Alsobrooks
6/13/2016 10:13:48 am
Thanks for the kind words, Veronica!
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6/12/2016 10:34:04 am
Love the description of the transition, and am intrigued by how he refers to his jaguar-self as "the other" as if it's an entirely separate being.
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Elizabeth Alsobrooks
6/13/2016 10:14:58 am
I think he feels it is...good observation, P.T. Thanks!
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Elizabeth Alsobrooks
6/13/2016 10:15:52 am
Oh, thank you, thank you, Elaine!
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6/12/2016 08:43:45 pm
Wonderful imagery! Love that the cat wants to keep the man at bay.
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Elizabeth Alsobrooks
6/13/2016 10:16:45 am
Interesting observation, Karen! Thanks!
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Elizabeth Alsobrooks
6/13/2016 10:17:52 am
Thanks for the kind words of encouragement, Addison!
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6/13/2016 10:15:59 am
Wow, what a powerful, evocative depiction of his other nature and transformation! Great snippet.
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Elizabeth Alsobrooks
6/13/2016 10:18:58 am
Oh, I am so glad that you liked it, J. Rose! Thank you!
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6/13/2016 08:50:15 pm
What a great description of the shift. That was amazing.
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Elizabeth Alsobrooks
6/13/2016 11:03:15 pm
Thank you so much for your kind words of encouragement, Cecilia!
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6/16/2016 07:31:47 am
Wonderful job of letting the reader experience the transition through him! :-)
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Elizabeth Alsobrooks
6/16/2016 05:52:39 pm
Thanks, Teresa!
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Daelyn Morgana
6/17/2016 09:18:07 am
Wow! I love the description of his change! And I love big cats so I love how it's a jaguar instead of something expected like a wolf or a bear. My first thought was a werewolf and you surprised me, which made it even better. Interesting how he refers to it as his other, like it has its own mind and soul. I'm curious about that.
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Elizabeth Alsobrooks
6/17/2016 02:10:30 pm
Thanks Daelyn! I'm glad you picked up on it, because there is a reason for it...!
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Elizabeth Alsobrooks
6/17/2016 02:11:56 pm
Thanks for the kind words, Linda. I really appreciate the encouragement. :)
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