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I have been sharing from my soon-to-be-released story The Opal Ring, involving a Jinn and a young woman named Jasmine who is using true magic to enhance her magician father's act in order to secure a Vegas contract and their freedom back to America. With the aid of her only friend, she finds a talisman that gives her control over a Jinn, whose spell casting will surely give her all the leverage she needs against her rich and powerful uncle and his henchmen. But at what cost? When we left off last week, her father had just seen the ring on her finger and claimed it had been buried with her mother. Naturally quite a few readers, including Hudson, are wondering how that's possible...
Just for fun, below is a painting I created titled, The Jinni, at the studio today. I paint for the sheer therapeutic love of it. Fellow art students felt it a fitting "monster" for Halloween!
“Then how could you have had it on the plane? You’re not making sense.” Had her mother been the Jinni’s last mistress?
“You were too old for dolls, but you kept it with you because your mother had given it to you. I opened the window blind on the plane, and the sunlight sparkled off the opal on the ring. It was around the doll’s ponytail.” “So how do you know mother didn’t put it there on the doll?” “She couldn’t do it anymore, couldn’t stand being around those vile men, and couldn’t see what that creature did to them. She tried to explain, tried to bargain with the Jinni, but he wouldn’t see reason. We were going to flee, find someone who could break the spell, but the very next day that car, it came out of nowhere.” He wasn’t focused on Jasmine any more, but seemed to be reliving the incident in his mind, the terror of it fresh on his face. “Do you really think it was just an accident?”
I hope you enjoyed the snippet I posted for Elizabeth this week. I like her painting, too. It smells. I've been sniffing it all night, but she won't let me lick it. That's okay. It doesn't smell like meat or popcorn anyway. Be sure to visit the other Weekend Writing Warriors and #SnippetSunday Authors for some great new reads!
20 Comments
10/2/2016 01:34:19 pm
Ooh!! How did she come by that ring indeed? Love the idea of this story. And that painting is awesome!!
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Elizabeth Alsobrooks
10/2/2016 11:13:09 pm
Thanks, J. Rose!
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10/2/2016 02:24:51 pm
That ring sounds like it has powers of its own. Nice snippet! :)
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Elizabeth Alsobrooks
10/2/2016 11:15:31 pm
Thanks, Jessica. I don't think I'd want to wear it!
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Julie Evelyn Joyce
10/2/2016 05:11:31 pm
Wow. Powerful last line! Love your artwork, too! Very spooky, indeed! :)
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Elizabeth Alsobrooks
10/2/2016 11:16:43 pm
I have a lot of fun with it. Thanks, Julie!
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Elaine Cantrell
10/2/2016 09:35:26 pm
The ring sounds very powerful!
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Elizabeth Alsobrooks
10/2/2016 11:18:19 pm
Or the spell caster who enchanted it, Elaine!
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Elizabeth Alsobrooks
10/2/2016 11:19:08 pm
Thanks for the input, Cecilia!
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10/3/2016 11:31:35 am
Thanks for the explanation! Very intriguing ring indeed.
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Elizabeth Alsobrooks
10/3/2016 07:50:11 pm
Thanks, Joyce! ;)
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10/3/2016 05:07:14 pm
LOVE the painting!
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Elizabeth Alsobrooks
10/3/2016 07:56:35 pm
Thanks, P.T.! I'm pretty skittish about displaying any of it as I do it for fun and just began a few months ago. I took a class at our sub's clubhouse and when they asked me to put some pics up for the summer I reluctantly agreed. Today I got a phone call from the instructor who was back in town (a lot of snowbirds around here) and she loved my little vignette of primary color pics in the clubhouse! ::blushing::
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Elizabeth Alsobrooks
10/5/2016 02:26:10 pm
Thanks, Iris!
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10/4/2016 08:07:59 pm
The story continues to have lots of twists and turns, very intriguing! Enjoyed today's excerpt...
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Elizabeth Alsobrooks
10/5/2016 02:27:19 pm
Thank you so much, Veronica!
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10/5/2016 10:03:33 pm
Oooh, spooky. Now we're getting into mystery. I like it. I'm still a tad confused on timeline compared to the plane and buried with her mother.
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10/8/2016 08:32:00 pm
I am really curious how the ring went from her dead mama in a coffin in the ground to her finger, or rather, on the doll's ponytail. Does the ring have powers, the doll, or Jasmine?
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