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Welcome to Weekend Writing Warriors, the weekly hop for everyone who loves to write! Sign up below with your name, blog and email and share an 8 to 10 sentence snippet of your writing on Sunday. Your post needs to be live between 12:00 noon on Saturday 11/19/16 and 09:00 AM on Sunday 11/20/16. Visit the other participants on the list and read, critique and comment on their 8sunday posts. Spread the word, share the love, warriors. Twitter hashtag #8sunday. It's NaNoWriMo, and my very first time participating in it, so of course you will be getting excerpts from my WIP, a novella, Stolen Secrets! If you have been following Book II of my Illuminati series, The Tree of Life, you will know that I just introduced a minor character, Prince Mukhtar, who appears in both Book I, The Book of Life, and Book 11, of the Illuminati Series. He is also the hero of a Romance Fantasy Novella I am writing for NaNoWriMo, a little spinoff adventure! In it, Isis has sent him to retrieve a chalice to be used in a ceremony that will break the spell the jinni, Ornias (from my short horror story) has cast upon the Ring of Solomon, before their mortal enemy, Set, can get his hands on it. The heroine, Lady Isabella Valentine, has been hired to retrieve the same artifact from an anonymous benefactor, who has sent a helper, David Khoury, to assist her on the archaeological dig. Prince Mukhtar wishes to change hr mind. Here’s a bit from where I left off last week . . . (*Note: It's NaNo, so may be a bit rough in spots.) She took the drawing, happy to distract herself from the intensity of his stare, the penetrating azure gaze that both took her breath away and made her want to gasp in gulps of air to fuel the manic beating of her heart at his nearness. Then, recognition made her take in a slow, deep breath, as she willed herself to remain outwardly calm. She looked up and said, “May I ask why you are seeking this?” “So you are familiar with the piece,” he said as fact and not a question, and the small smile he bestowed upon her matched the warmth in his voice as if she had just passed some test at which he had hoped she would excel. “Yes, of course. Most in my field would recognize The Chalice of Isis. But you didn’t answer my question,” she persisted. “I have a buyer with bottomless pockets, of course. And do you know where it is located?” he asked, small dimples appearing in his cheeks. “I’m afraid I can’t help you,” Isabella said, handing him back the sketch. I hope you liked the snippet I posted for Elizabeth this week while she's busy with NaNo! She gave me popcorn, so she can do whatever she wants as far as I'm concerned. I love popcorn! Be sure to visit the other fine Weekend Writing Warriors and #Snippet Sunday Authors for more great reads!
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11/20/2016 06:42:52 am
I doubt he is going to just accept that answer. Nice dialogue, Elizabeth. Good luck with NaNoWriMo.
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Elizabeth Alsobrooks
11/27/2016 02:22:40 am
Thanks, Kim! He doesn't like to take no for an answer...for sure!
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11/20/2016 06:59:34 am
Ah - she is hiding something, and he is delightful!
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Elizabeth Alsobrooks
11/27/2016 02:23:04 am
I agree, Aurora!
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Elizabeth Alsobrooks
11/27/2016 02:23:35 am
Aw, thanks for the words of encouragement, Angelica. I really appreciate it!
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Elizabeth Alsobrooks
11/27/2016 02:23:58 am
He is pretty impressive! LOL!
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11/20/2016 10:46:33 am
Sounds like the money and dimples didn't work on Isabella. Great snippet! :)
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Elizabeth Alsobrooks
11/27/2016 02:24:24 am
He'll just have to try harder! LOL!
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11/20/2016 11:02:41 am
Why do I have the feeling he's not going to like that answer. lol
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Elizabeth Alsobrooks
11/27/2016 02:24:47 am
You got that right, Karen! LOL!
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11/20/2016 11:31:47 am
Hm, too bad she doesn't know...or is she holding back? Nice job, such an intriguing premise!
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Elizabeth Alsobrooks
11/27/2016 02:25:26 am
Thanks, Janell! Lots going on for sure!
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11/20/2016 04:02:27 pm
If she knew where it was, she'd probably have already got it... unless she has a really good reason for lying.
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Elizabeth Alsobrooks
11/27/2016 02:26:05 am
Went to a write-in today, so plugging away! Thanks, Caitlin!
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11/20/2016 04:51:00 pm
Hudson, you picked a good selection. She definitely has the hots for this guy!
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Elizabeth Alsobrooks
11/27/2016 02:26:33 am
Yes making puppy dog eyes!
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11/20/2016 05:47:15 pm
great snippet
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Elizabeth Alsobrooks
11/27/2016 02:26:56 am
Thanks, Pam!
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Elizabeth Alsobrooks
11/27/2016 02:27:40 am
Thanks, Elaine! Sometimes I think it can be the hardest thing to write, making each character unique.
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Diane Burton
11/20/2016 06:19:08 pm
Great snippet. Good dialogue.
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Elizabeth Alsobrooks
11/27/2016 02:28:21 am
Thanks, Diane! Yours was wonderful too, but I wasn't able to comment on it, try as I might!
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Alicia Dean
11/20/2016 06:27:38 pm
Love this snippet...good luck in Nano!!
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Elizabeth Alsobrooks
11/27/2016 02:28:47 am
Thanks, Alicia! I'm trying!
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11/20/2016 08:10:37 pm
I bet he wasn't expecting that answer but he probably isn't going to give up either. Another fascinating excerpt.
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Elizabeth Alsobrooks
11/27/2016 02:29:24 am
Thanks so much, Veronica! I appreciate the encouragement!
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Julie Evelyn Joyce
11/20/2016 08:43:48 pm
Love the set-up here! Very nicely written. Best of luck with your NaNo-ing! :)
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Elizabeth Alsobrooks
11/27/2016 02:30:00 am
Aw, thanks, Julie! You made me smile!
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11/20/2016 08:53:06 pm
I get the feeling he may not take that refusal very well. He seems nice, yeah, but he's a Prince, they're used to getting their way. This will be interesting.
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Elizabeth Alsobrooks
11/27/2016 02:30:30 am
Yes, he does like to "win" for sure!
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11/20/2016 11:42:01 pm
Intriguing snippet. I wonder why she says she can't help him.
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Elizabeth Alsobrooks
11/27/2016 02:30:58 am
Good question, P.T.! You find out this week!
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11/21/2016 09:28:34 pm
I love how self-aware she is, able to pull herself together and deal with him calmly.
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Elizabeth Alsobrooks
11/27/2016 02:31:39 am
IKR? I wish I were that together! Thanks, Christina!
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