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Again I am sharing from my new release, Stolen Secrets. Last week it was a steamy scene, so this week, I chose something a little different.
“So they literally believed Isis was with them, a goddess who could walk among them and interact with them,” Elsa said.
“Of course,” David and Muhktar said together, then looked at each other and chuckled. Isabella glanced between them. Their tone had been more than affirmative. It sounded as though they too believed Isis was a very real, literal entity and were surprised at Elsa’s questioning of that fact. Rumors sometimes tied Prince Muhktar to the Illuminati, a secret cult known to exist since at least the time of the Pharaohs who built the pyramids. Until this moment, she had always dismissed those rumors as passed along by those wishing to cast even more mystique on the infamous persona of one of the country’s wealthiest and certainly most eligible bachelors. The Illuminati itself was an organization which, though it had certainly existed since she herself had seen ancient artifacts whose writings and symbolisms supported its existence in Egypt, was unable to be tied to any one deity, purpose or era. Illuminati was a word most often whispered with respect, almost reverence, among the superstitious Egyptians, as though it still existed and was to be feared. Could those rumors be true? What might it have to do with this artifact they sought?
I hope you like the snippet I shared for Elizabeth this week. She has been sick with food poisoning this week so did very little for three days and never even got out of bed for two of them. Personally I'm not a fan of seafood, so she should just stick to my food from now on. Be sure to visit the other Weekend Writing Warriors and Snippet Sunday authors for more great reads.
25 Comments
2/19/2017 07:13:36 am
"Could those rumors be true?" The hinge point of the plot. Nice scene, Doc E!
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Elizabeth Alsobrooks
2/23/2017 06:25:27 am
Thanks, you got it, for sure!
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Elizabeth Alsobrooks
2/23/2017 06:26:15 am
You and me both, the more complicated the plot twists the better!
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2/19/2017 11:44:56 am
I enjoyed the snippet, especially since we know that the two men know the truth about Isis. I mentioned your book in my New Releases column last week by the way. Best wishes!
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Elizabeth Alsobrooks
2/23/2017 06:27:02 am
Thank you so much, Veronica! I really appreciate the support!
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2/19/2017 12:25:19 pm
Nicely written scene, which reveals a lot in a clever way. So sorry you had food poisoning! Hope you're feeling better now!
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Elizabeth Alsobrooks
2/23/2017 06:28:06 am
Thanks, Julie! I learned that it's probably best to be very, very cautious of food trucks!
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2/19/2017 01:10:22 pm
Considering the book's title, I'm quite certain the Illuminati are real ... at least in this fictional universe.
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Elizabeth Alsobrooks
2/23/2017 06:28:44 am
I'm sure you're right, Ed! LOL!
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Elaine Cantrell
2/19/2017 04:29:43 pm
I'm with Ed. The Illuminati must be real.
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Elizabeth Alsobrooks
2/23/2017 06:29:32 am
Of course they are, Elaine! I would never EVER say so unless it was absoutely true!
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2/19/2017 06:44:51 pm
"Could those rumors be true?" Nice hook!
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Elizabeth Alsobrooks
2/23/2017 06:30:51 am
Thanks, Teresa. He layed beside my bed the entire time I was ill, very upset that mommy was sick. Such a sweet little guardian!
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Diane Burton
2/19/2017 08:19:29 pm
Hmm. Isis is real to them. What will she do when they find the artifact? Hope you're feeling better. Food poisoning is no fun. Good thing you've got Hudson to help you out.
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Elizabeth Alsobrooks
2/23/2017 06:31:51 am
Thanks, Diane. Now if only he could reach the sink so he could do the dishes!
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Elizabeth Alsobrooks
2/23/2017 06:32:35 am
Thanks, Amy! The plot certainly thickens here!
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Elizabeth Alsobrooks
2/23/2017 06:33:31 am
Thanks, P.T.! She has no idea what lamp she's just rubbed! LOL!
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Alicia Dean
2/20/2017 06:00:10 am
Loved the snippet! Definitely made me want to read more.
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Elizabeth Alsobrooks
2/23/2017 06:34:13 am
Thanks, Alicia! That is always good to hear!
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Elizabeth Alsobrooks
2/23/2017 06:34:42 am
Right you are, Kim!
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2/25/2017 03:26:54 pm
I'm curious to know if those rumors are true.
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