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Welcome to Weekend Writing Warriors, the weekly hop for everyone who loves to write! Sign up below with your name, blog and email and share an 8 to 10 sentence snippet of your writing on Sunday. Your post needs to be live between 12:00 noon on Saturday 07/29/17 and 09:00 AM on Sunday 07/30/17. Visit the other participants on the list and read, critique and comment on their 8sunday posts. Spread the word, share the love, warriors. Twitter hashtag #8sunday. Continuing from my last WIP post, I will be adding a snippet that introduces an important new character to my Shadow Walkers story, Father Benjamin. She hadn’t let the child out of her sight since they recovered her, and had repeatedly thanked Sabina for helping her get her baby back. That seemed understandable to Sabina. What Tessa hadn’t done was ask about the jinn, and Sabina found that to be as odd as the fact that Lydia was now grabbing handfuls of cereal from the bowl and jamming them into her mouth until her checks resembled a chipmunk. A knock sounded as Tessa grabbed Lydia’s hand with alarm and said, “Lydia, stop that this minute!” Sabina hurried from the small sitting room, wondering as she walked toward the hallway doors what lasting trauma her godchild faced. The left door suddenly opened, allowing a hooded Jesuit to step into the suite’s antechamber. Ignoring her outstretched hand, he rushed past her toward the sound of shattering glass behind her, which was followed by Tessa’s shocked cry of, “Lydia! What are you doing?” I was about to find a paddle for all the rain in my backyard right now, but here's no sense getting my beautiful hair all wet and messy. Instead of going outside, I posted Elizabeth's short story snippet. I hope you enjoyed it. Be sure to visit the other Weekend Writing Warriors and Snippet Sunday authors for more great snippets!
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7/30/2017 10:26:23 am
All kinds of chaos breaking out in this scene. Love the headlong pace of it.
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7/30/2017 10:28:56 am
Oh, dear. I'm not sure how old Lydia is, so I'm not sure if she's possessed or acting like a normal two year old. (Actually, I'm not sure there's a difference...)
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7/30/2017 11:16:43 am
what a curious intrusion. I look foreward to learning more about him.
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7/30/2017 12:51:00 pm
Several interesting new developments here today, enjoyed the snippet!
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7/30/2017 01:08:01 pm
Interesting snippet, though I feel a little disoriented...
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7/30/2017 02:05:43 pm
Wow, weird goings-on. Clearly the Jesuit is going to be an important person with knowledge the others don't possess . . . though I wondered how she knew the priest was a Jesuit. I was under the impression that you can't tell just by looking, except that the Jesuits I've met (most noticeably Andrew Greeley) never wore religious garb.
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7/30/2017 04:39:18 pm
What a fascinating snippet - very intriguing and I wanted to know more!
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Elaine Cantrell
7/30/2017 06:40:52 pm
I what to know what she's doing too!
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7/30/2017 08:28:01 pm
Something strange in the neighborhood... I love how you started pretty subtle with the wrongness, and then punched it up to 11 at the end of the snippet. :)
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7/30/2017 09:51:59 pm
I'm very interested to find out what's going on here and why a monk appeared on the doorstep.
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